Wednesday 10 a.m.
I got a phone call from a agent telling me that there was a case for me to cover. i got to the crime scene i couldn't believe what i had just seen. The body of the victim was still there. the victim was known as jenny she lived on a apartment with her parents and her boyfriends name was Paul. Her parents were nowhere to be found . The body was on the floor it had . i walked around the apartment. In the girl's room had things all over the floor . the went to the parents room searched around the room, everything gone there was nothing there , the furniture was there but everything else was there. I went back to the room where the body was at, i did notice that there was a knife in the room , The knife had blood on it which is believe that is was the knife that was use to stab Jenny. i went back to jenny's room i remember seeing some pictures on the floor. i picked them up there were pictures of her and Paul, but some of the pictures had Paul scratched or cut off. as soon as i saw this i wondered if they have had an argument of something. that's when i decided to have a talk to him. And i went on and ask people around the neighborhood and people who knew jenny's family very well about her parents, and if they noticed an awkward change in the family.
Wednesday 12 p.m
i went to the school where jenny and Paul both attended to. i was in the office i talked to the principle and told him what had happened, he told me he understood but that Paul hadn't gone to school.i got Paul's information from the principle. i went to Paul's house luckily he was home. He lived by himself. he looked terrified, but he also looked lost.I didn't tell him who i really was, i told him that i was a counselor and that i had heard about what had happened to his girlfriend. he was still quite. but little by little he started talking, he told me how he didn't think this was ever going to happen, he was telling me the story as if he was saying that jenny wanted to suicide her herself. i have to admit the way the scene looked it did make it look like it was suicide. but i asked him if she had ever talked about deaths, about killing herself or other stuff that could have lead to her death. i asked him if he had talked to jenny lately. he looked pale and now he really looked scared. I DIDN'T KILL HER!!!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU THINK I KILLED HER!!! I LOVED HER!!!!!! I WOULD NEVER HAVE KILLED HER!!!! so then i knew something had gone wrong.
Wednesday 4 p.m.
i talked to Paul but all i got out of him is that the last time he talked to her, she sounded scared and hurt. but that she wouldn't tell him anything. i asked when and at what time was that call. he had told me that she had called him at 4 a.m. in the morning at told him that she loved him and hung up, he tried to call her back but the phone was disconnected.in tears he said " i was calling her but it was disconnected, plus it was early in the morning i was tired,so i went back to sleep and then got a phone call saying that she was gone" i took him home and went to Jazmin's apartment. Jazmin was jenny's best friend the lived in the same building. Jazmin now told me " jenny was acting some what weird and that she will stay home all day and she wouldn't usually do that, she would usually go out with me or she will just go out with Paul, but ever since a week ago she stop going out she stayed home, she never came out, she had missed school 2 days that week, and she was ignoring Paul. he tried to talk to her but she would just walk away like she never heard him and when i tried to talk to her she would just look at me and wen i was done she would just walk away."
Wednesday 6 p.m.
i was in a car outside of the building. when i see jenny's parents going into the building i wondered if they knew what had happened to their daughter i went after them the go to the apartment and saw that the house was empty their daughter wasn't there and that there was blood in the living room. i was talking to them, the had some tears in their eyes. the demanded they wanted to know what had happened to their daughter and if she was killed by somebody they wanted to know who it was and that they wanted that person in jail for what they had done to their daughter.the ambulance took the body to do an autopsy on it to find out what exactly had happened to jenny.
Wednesday 8 p.m.
i wasn't really sure of what exactly what had happened to jenny but i did know that she had not committed suicide even though the scene was left in a way that will make someone think that.
the results of the autopsy were in. i had them in my hands i opened the letter and read it, jenny was killed by someone else and not herself. she was stabbed on her right side and was hit on her head with some kind of metal in the head. i had so many suspects in mind. so i had to find out who had done this to jenny. i went to the police department and told them that i needed a couple of them to help me because i need to bring some people in to take a Lie detector test .
they all had questions about jenny's death, i took in jenny's parents, paul, and Jazmin.
i had the result and surprised when i was that paul..... had passed
jazmin....passed
mom.....passed
and dad.... failed
I was surprised that he had killed his own daughter. he knew that i knew he was guilty and asked me if we could have a talk in private. we went into the conference room and started talking i told him that i was listening to him and whatever he had to say he had to tell me now that was when he started crying and confesed everything. he had told me that they had gotten into an arguement because he didnt like paul and he wanted them to break up and that she refused and then they were yelling at eachother and that he couldnt stand that his daughter arguing with him because of a guy and thats when he started to hit her, from then she got mad that he was hitting her and she ran to the kitchen and grabed a knife and pointed it at him she ran with it and dropped it and all of this had happened because when he had her on the floor hitting her he was super mad a saw the knife and stabed her and after he had killed her he was scared and cleared his figerprints and everything that was there that could have been there as evidence. and so on he turned himself in...
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