Monday, May 18, 2009

"The diary of Anne Frank"

1. Respond: The families must obey strict rules to avoid discovery. Which rules would be hardest for you to follow? Why?

The not moving at all and not being able to use rthe bathroom would be the hardest rules for me to follow, these would be the hardest rules for me to follow because i wouldnt be able to stay till for so long, and i wouldnt be able to just ignore when i really need to go to the bathroom.





2. (a) Recall: In Scene 1, what objects does Mr. Frank find in the secret rooms? (b) Connect: How are these objects connected with the rest of the act?

A) Mr.frank found a woman's white glove. B) This object connected with the rest of the act because it belonged to his daughther and that is what she wore when she fell in love with peter and went to go see him at his room.




3.(a) Recall: What special meaning does Hanukkah have for the families? (b) Deduce: What do Anne’s presents show about her? (c) Interpret: Why do the others react with enthusiasm to their presents?

A) The special meaning of hanukkah for the families was the hope of being able to go through everything to be able to survive and not go to concentration camps.

B) Anne's presents show that she wants them to cheer up, and not just counting the time untill there able to come out.

C) The others reacted with enthusiasm to their presents because they never they would have got a presents or even be able to celebrate it as they usually did before.


4. (a) Evaluate: With a partner, discuss Mr. Frank’s statement, “There are . . . no locks that anyone can put on your mind.” How does Anne prove that this is true?

A) Anne proves the statement true because she discovers that there is nothing that will stop you from thinking what you think, that she shall be able to think as far as she would like and there shall not be nobody to stop her from thinking what she thinks.


5. (a) What is the historical cause that forces the Franks to go into hiding? (b) What effects does this situation have on their daily lives?

A)The historical cause that forced the Franks to go into hiding was that there were germans that were sending jews into concentration camps, and seperating families.

B) Having to be hiding, having to see the same people daily and not having as much to eat, and being worried all the times were the effects caused by this situation.


6. In Scene 2, Anne and Peter discuss the Stars of David on their clothes. (a) What effects do the Nazis intend the wearing of the stars to have on the Jews? (b) What background information about the war and the Nazis’ treatment of the Jews helps you to link this cause with its intended effects?
A) Nazis intened the wearing of the stars to have on the jews, so that that way they know by a glance that they are jews and wont have to go throught a lot of work to find out if they are jews or not.

B) That they were planing to wipe out the jews, they were always planing to wipe people and places out, this was the background information i had about the war and the nazis' treatment of the jews that help me link this cause with its intended effects.




7. Complete an organizer like the one shown with examples of dialogue that achieve each purpose.
Dialogue-->(Reveals character and realationship)[Mr. Van Daan] Did Mr. Kraler warn you that you won’t get much to eat here? You can imagine . . . three ration books among the seven of us . . . and now you make eight. Mr. Van Daan- is the kind of man who speaks the truth and doesnt care if it bothers other people or not.

-->(Advances the action of the plot) Mr. frank. It was a thief. That noise must have scared him away. everyone is now thinking that someone seems to know that they are there and think they will tell on them.

-->(Develops the conflict) Dussel. I think some day he’ll be caught and then he’ll make a bargain with the Green Police . . . if they’ll let him off, he’ll tell them where some Jews are hiding! This is when they now all think that the thief will tell on them and now are starting to be scared to death.




8. After Mr. Kraler asks if Jan Dussel can join the Franks and the Van Daans in hiding, what does the dialogue among the characters reveal about their personalities?

After Mr. Kraller asks if Mr. dussel can join the franks and the Van Daan in hiding it really show every body's personalities, it showed how some of them were very obnoxious or very calm.



PG. # 1-9


1. what do you like best about Anne Frank? How would you like having her as a friend?

What i like best about Anne Frank is that she is the type of girl who always thinks in a possitive way and not a negative way, and that she is very hopefull. I would really like her as a friend, she would be the friend who will always be there when you dont feel right and will make you see the good view of things and not their bad sides.


2.(A)What disturbing news does Mr.kraler bring on New Year's Day?(B) What hint does this give about the ending of the play?

(A) The disdurbing bad news that Mr. Kraler brings is that there was a worker who found out that the franks, and van daans were hiding up in the ware house and told him that he told him that he remember a door being there that led into to attic, they all tought it was blackmail.

(B) The hint that this gives us about the ending of the play is that the worker was going to betray them by telling on them with the green police.


3.(A)What is the time span of act II?(B)How have the characters changed since the end of act I(C)How do you know that Anne has changed.
(A)The time span of Act II is about 7 to 8 months.
(B) The characters have changed sice the end of act I, example peter- he now likes anne and is more open minded, anne- she used to play around with peter and get him mad and now is in love with him and understands much more about what is going on.
(C) She now actually likes Peter and has and way open mind, she doesnt let anyone enterfier with her thoughts. She is put up to her full potential.
4.(A)How can Anne believe that"...in spite of everything...people are really good at heart?"(B)What does Mr. Frank mean when he says:"She puts me to shame"?
(A) Anne believes that besides everything that is going on all people are good at heart, She believes this because she thinks that if this wouldnt have enterfiered with all of their lives they would have been with their families and being such a nice person, but since they are going through everything deep inside they are very nice people(B) I personally think that what Mr. Frank means when he says that statement, is that she puts him to shame because of everything they had done to them she was still thinking that they were nice people,he just couldnt believe that his daughter never seemed to notice that all of these people were maltreating them and didnt even try to help them out and she had died is cause of what they had done to her, he was ashamed that his daughter died thinking that they were nice people.
5.For each of the following events, identify

Wednesday, May 6, 2009

"Hansel And Gretel"

Point of view: Hansel [brother]


I have noticed that my father has been thinking a lot lately, he sure is woried. i went near the room, to find out what has been going on with my father. I hear him say " Oh my dear wife, what shall we do, the job is not going so good and i'm not going to be able to bring our daily bread anymore, what shall we do of the kids, we hardly have food to feed ourselves.... Oh my dear wife, what shall we do". Sure now he was not the only one who was worried. And so when the mean lady... our stepmother was about to talk, Gretel came along and started to listen,too. we heard her say " i'll sure tell you what to do HUSBAND , tomarrow morning as we go off to work, we shall take the kids with us and leave them in the middle of the forest, they shall not find their way back to the house, i shall with them a piece of bread"Said the lady

"NO!! I shall not permit that, I cant to this to my children"Said father

"well then we all should die of hunger!"Said the lady


It was time for gretel and i to go to sleep but, both were so shocked. She started to cry dramaticly.
" Don't cry my little sister, please stay strong, the good god will help us"i told her.

Monday, May 4, 2009

"Adam's Diary"

i seen that thing coming my way, i had no clue of what that thing was. It was following me everywhere i didnt know what to do make that thing leave me alone. Since i didnt know what is was i just decided to leave the thing alone, but then it came to me, A LADY!! yes yes that's what it was, Its a lady just like lilith. I was hoping it not to be lilith, i came to a point where i thought it was lilith i was trying to run away from her, she was no good>>NOT AT ALL GOOD<<, she wasn't good so the man who comes to see me in the night kicked her out of this beautiful garden, but how did she get in her was my question. I DON'T KNOW BUT I CANT BE ANYWHERE NEARBY HER! .


she came by the next morning and i was freaking up so i climbed a tree a wouldn't come down unless she was gone. she was just there just watching me, mean while i took a look at her, she looked nothing like Lilith, just when I was thinking about who this lady might be... i took a turn to climb back down, and i got hit by a mud ball just behind my ear. OOOOh she got me so mad but I was told that i shouldn't have this feeling towards nobody and at no time. i listened ,i didn't want to be mad so i just talked back to her and she was just so surprised that i was actually talking back i got to know her a little more, and after time i was actually talking to her but, i got scared because i started liking her and i dont want her to get taken away from me either.

"Adam's Diary"

"Adam's Diary"

Friday, May 1, 2009

Fable

There was once a guy who really like this girl. He didnt know who to tell her that he wanted her to know that he liked her, So he asked his best friend for advice. he surely did not know that he was also falling for her, they talked about how should he tell her, they both talked and decided that the guy's friend was going to tell her. they saw her and the friend said
" i'll go tell her right now , i'll take advandage she's alone"
"yes go on, hurry GO!" the Guy said
altho he wasnt prepared for what was about to happen. They friend got to the girl and soon he talked about how he liked her, they talked... he asked her out... she responded with a kiss.

The guy didnt see this coming and now he was completly heartbroken. the girl of his dreams ended up with the friend he trusted.

Wednesday, April 29, 2009

"The Outcasts of Poker Flat"

If you had to blame someone or something for the outcasts' death, who/what would you blame & why? [[pick one only]]
  • Uncle Billy
  • Citizens Of Poker Flat
  • Bad Luck
  • Outcasts

If i had to blame someone or something for the outcasts' death i would blame bad luck. I would blame bad luck because if they wouldn't have ran away this wouldnt have happend. If they wouldnt have stayed over night they wouldnt have been snowed in. they wouldnt have been having problems with food, and the weather. if wouldnt have stayed they wouldnt have to sent tom for help and they wouldnt have died. piney wouldnt have died because of all the snow and wind that came into the hut. this is why i would have blamed babd luck for the deaths of the outcasts'

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Flowers For Algernon

If you were given a choice to have an operation that would make you much smarter, would you do it, especially if you knew that the effects of the surgery would only be temporary? why or why not? Use examples from the story.

If i was given a choice to have an operation that would make me much smarter i would have rejected the operation specially if i knew that the side effects of the operation were only going to be temporary. i would have rejected the operation because i wouldn't want to be a lot smarter than i am and then get it taken away and be back to normal, in my opinion everything will change because the friends i have and all the people who i talk to will also change when i got the operation done. Of course if i did get the operation i would know more people and talk to more too but i will also lose friends, and by the time when everything goes back to normal the friends i used to have wouldn't really talk to me since they stopped talking to me before, and the people who i started talking to wouldn't talk to me either since i wouldn't be as smart as i was, Just like what happened to charlie... he started to talk to people when he was as smart as a genius, but when he went back to normal all the people who he claimed to be his friends were just laughing at him. this is why i would reject the operation. i rather be myself just the way i am normally

Friday, April 17, 2009

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button, Chapter 8- The End

FAMILY, AGE, BEAUTY --> explain what this story says about each of these issues. Use examples from the story to support your explanations.



FAMILY--> This story says that FAMILY is not always going to be there to support you, and at times your FAMILY wont even have the pleasure of you being with them. That at times they will feel embarrassed to be seen with you. In the book it states "when visitors are in the house I want you to call me 'Uncle'--not 'Roscoe,' but 'Uncle,' do you understand? said Roscoe, with this sentence you will see that the son wants his dad to kall him uncle and not Roscoe...his real name. To my opinion this book is trying to say that your FAMILY wont alwaqys be there for you.





AGE--> This story is like trying to say that AGE is not just a number. That AGE really does matter in life. That if you dont look like your age everyone will look and think that you are very strange.

Thursday, April 16, 2009

The Curious Case of Benjamin Button, Chapters 3-7

After reading Chapters 3-7, predict three problems you think Benjamin will encounter & give your solutions for each.


I think that benjamin will encounter the following problems. One of the problems he might encounter is that he is going to get tired of his wife and he will want to leave her with with son, and go live the rest of his life alone, I think that he should try to talk to his wife about what is really happening to him and tell her everything and make her listen to him first. Another problem that i think benjamin will encounter is that he is going to lose alot of his knowledge so he really wont know what to do at all over the time, i think he should try to contact people who knew about him since he was born to talk to his wife telling her everything about him so that she can believe him and she will know that at a time she's going to take care of him, since we wont be able to take care of himself. I think that benjamin will also encounter the promblem of being accused of being crazy, I think that benjamin should go to a therapist who will actually listen to him because... the way things are looking he cant really be with his wife since she think he's crazy.

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

The curious case of Benjamin Button, chapter 2

Roger is so overly concerned with how Benjamin looks & is worried about what people are going to say. What Should he do ?

I think that Roger should stop talking to his son the way he is.I just think that he should just deal with it. After all Benjamin is still their son and he will always be, Roger should atleast thank god that he has a son, unlike to other how want to have one but can't have one. Roger should think about it for some time and see the bright side of it and not the dark side.

The Curious Case Of Benjamin Button, Chapter 1

Question: What would you have done if you were Roger Button in Chapter 1?

If I was Roger Button in the first chapter, I would have been freaked out that my first child was born as a seventy year old man. This old man was my son, and he was older than me... I would so freak out. I would've probably ran out of the room where the old man was at. I would've ran to my wife and as her if it was true that he was our baby. And if it was I would have probably ran out of the hospital and stay home for a while to clear things up, Then I'll probably go back to the hospital and go on knowing that he was my son and that I would have to deal with it.

Monday, April 13, 2009

The Night He Left

As I get closer to my cousin, he looked so pale
I ran to him as my mood is scared
He talked to everyone in one single voice
Saying he will always be there
I looked at him as if I didn't know he was in pain
And asked him are you sure your OK?
He took a deep breath
“please let me see my” dad he said
As my uncle came in, I told him “come quick”
I ran to Sergio helped him up and walked him to his dad
He fell upon him saying, I'm gone
We looked at him,With tears
and our eyes full of fear
He just said “please don’t cry and be Strong tonight”
“once I said I’ll die at night”
And I truly wish it wasn't this time
I looked at him, cried my eyes out
They he laid back
As his soul went away .


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Monday, March 30, 2009

A picture is worth a thousand words

It was early in the morning when Lily woke us up " hurry and get ready we are going to a fair this morning". A fair ? i thought the only time when we went to the fair is when we actually have money to go with. i wondered if we even had money this time. Grandma hasn't been working as often, Lily only goes to work when the lady in the big house calls her. Dad is the only one who has been working and all times. i don't think we got enough money to go to the fair with, i went with Lily to go wake up the guys.





when we got to the room i was surprised that they were up already."how come you guys are up and ready today but when you guys have to be up you guys are always in bed?". " Dad came and told us that we were going to a fair today, and that if we got ready early we were going to have a surprise". i ran and got ready as Lily came into the room saying you have to go downstairs rite now, huge surprise go down QUICK. I was so confused they woke us up to get ready to go to the fair and now we have a HUGE surprise downstairs. And so i walked down the stairs when they're was a smell, i had never smelled anything like that, well only once i a while when they family in the big house left their windows open.But that smell was weird to be coming from downstairs. i walked into the room and wow i had a surprise, we had FOOD, a lot of food in the table. i ran and took a chair as the others were coming down i waited for everyone to come down. i looked around and looked at all the food on the table there was pie,bread,cheese, and a jar of orange juice. But i had never eaten this before, i don't know how all of this tasted.





The others came in running, but grandma was in the bedroom sitting down just looking out the window. "Grandma come down and eat there's a lot of food on the table" " i guess I'll be down in a little bid" "hurry grandma we'll wait for you". she came down and sat down on the chair next to Michael. she didn't have a smile on her face, i wondered why wasn't she happy, we had a lot of food, everyone was together, its a nice sunny day. Grandma started to cry, she got up and walked away. Lily went after her and went to go talk to her and came back and made us make a prayer. A prayer that we always do, day by day. A prayer that we dedicate to our MOTHER. My mom died when i was little and she was giving birth to my little brother. Grama came back and told us that even though she wasnt our mom's mother she still felt the pain because they got along so much. and that our mom was the only person who used to listen to her when daddy wouldnt.My mom was one of a kind, My mom was a child that lived in a big house. She had a big heart, she married my father knowing that he wasnt rich like the others.they had all of us kids and had to live in my father's farm since her parents in which i dont call my grandparents didnt want her to live in the house they kicked her out because she was with a man who didnt have money. and since i've heard the story of what had happened i dont even want to hear about those people they only one i will talk to from my mothers family is my aunt and her children in which she only has two and she is the only one that actually come and visits us and gives us presents and helps us out with some of the payments at times.

well back to when we did the prayer and were about to eat i asked my dad how had he bought all of this food and he told me that he was walking home from the neighbors barn and while he was walking back he saw a whole bunch of bills on the floor. he was looking around to see if there was anybody that the bills could've been. but nobody was around and they were in the middle of the road so he went and grabbed them and the first thing he thought of was to buy food for every one in the house. and so that how we got to eat all of this food and dad was able to buy a camara and he got aunt Nancy to take a picture of the family in our usual days now. dad was smart enough to save the rest of the money and we saved some go to decorte my mothers grave with a lone of nice flowers. And so you see the picture of us now, day by day we have good meals and all of us kids are going to school now and daddy has a better job, which means we are living the best out of our lives =]

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Pet Peeves

  1. Hate Cheaters
  2. Hate when people lie
  3. Hate when people want it there way
  4. Hate when people brag about things that don't really matter.
  5. Hate when people talk to much and don't get to the point.
  6. Hate when parents yell at me for no reason
  7. Hate when people call private
  8. Hate when people try to force to me to do things
  9. Hate waking people up in the mornings
  10. Hate when people ignore you
  11. Hate when people go over my house to use my things
  12. Hate when guys stare at you but don't say anything
  13. Hate when people follow me everywhere
  14. Hate when people show off
  15. Hate when people misspell my name
  16. Hate when they mispronounce my name
  17. Hate when my siblings lock themselves in MY ROOM
  18. Hate when people go through my stuff
  19. Hate when people mess around with my things
  20. Hate when people don't pick up their dog's crap.
  21. Hate how friends try to get with me cousins
  22. Hate when people call me by Jacqueline.. even tho its my real name
  23. Hate when people talk smack about me and they don't even know me
  24. Hate backstabbers
  25. Hate two-faced people
  26. Hate REBOUNDS....lol (if you know, you'll understand) =]
  27. Hate wearing glasses
  28. Hate when people are next to me eating chocolate and not sharing
  29. Hate when people talk but don't make any sense
  30. Hate when Men hit on u knowing your underage
  31. Hate when guys try to get with me knowing that im taken

Monday, March 23, 2009

The secrete

It was my best friend's deepest, darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. he came up to me. " hey i really need tell you something" he said.



"hey johnny,...okay... what happened?"i said



" I'm going to tell u something but you cant tell nobody, its a secret" johnny said



"OK, i wont say nothing but what happened?"i said



" my girlfriend is pregnant, and i don't know what to do!" he said



i was shocked "well it is yours rite"i told him



"of course,... i don't know what to do....." he told me







The bell rang and we went to our classes. we only had one class together. but there was meeting today in which i had to attend and he couldn't so i wasn't going to see him until after school. i couldn't stop thinking about what he had told me. he always told me everything, and he had kept this from me until now. i don't know if i should go on and tell someone. i didn't know what to do.i was worried of what were they gonna do next. johnny is like the brother i always wished for , and Daniela is the friend that would always be there for me.







it was after school, i went to my locker to get my things and leave. i saw Daniela, i didn't know if i should just go see johnny or should i go see her and tell her that i know what was going on and talk to her. i risked it. " hey Daniela, i talked to johnny earlier he told me everything.. are you OK?"i asked her



"hey Jacky....yea i know he told me that he was going to tell you... yea I'm okay but I'm just confused i don't know what I'm going to do, I'm going to tell my mom this Friday so i hope everything goes OK " she said



" ooh i hope things go OK, well if anything you know I'm always here for you, well I'm suppose to go look for johnny so ill just go see you at your house in like an hour, if that's OK"i told her



" actually i was wondering if i could sleep over your house because i don't want to stay home tonight"she said



" okay then meet me at my house at 4:30 or 5 ,... I'm going to go look for johnny OK bye"i told her and walked away.











i ran to go look for johnny and i didn't see him. i started walking home when i got a phone call from him. i answered and he told me to turn around and walk a block down. and so i did, i saw him there he was sitting down on the stairs of his friends house. i sat next to him and started talking to him, he told me that he was going to keep Daniela at his house for sometime because she was going to leave her house after she told her mom. i didn't know what to say.i knew that as soon as Daniela's mom found out that she was gone she would come look for her at my house and then she will go on looking for her, but i don't want to lie to her mom when she asks me if i know where she's at or where could she be at. but i don't want to tell on them because i don't want to betray them. they are always there for me and now i would back off on them. i didn't know what to say but i knew that i had to be there for her, i had made a promise that she would always be there for them. .....>>>>>I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO <<<<<<<.














the days passed by and all i can think about is them. all that was on my mind was WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO.. i didnt know but i do know that i wasnt going to tell on them. that same day her mom came to my house and asked me if i had seen her because she had left the house. i knew everything but i couldnt say it


" no i dont know where she's at, the last time i saw her was at school"i told her.


she left my house i knew she was going to be looking for her so i called johnny and told him to bring daniela over to my house like at 8 at night and to come threw the ally, and so it happend daniela's mom found out where johnny lived and went to go look for her at his house and didnt find her since daniela was now at my house. this happened every two days until she was 9 months prgnant. she stop coming over to my house and had her baby it was a boy and looked just like her mom. she tried to talk to her mom but she wouldnt listen to her, she ignored her. and now at times i wonder how would it be if i would've told her mom everything that was happening.

what would've you done??

Thursday, March 19, 2009

Her mysterious death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances & i was assigned to the case.

Wednesday 10 a.m.




I got a phone call from a agent telling me that there was a case for me to cover. i got to the crime scene i couldn't believe what i had just seen. The body of the victim was still there. the victim was known as jenny she lived on a apartment with her parents and her boyfriends name was Paul. Her parents were nowhere to be found . The body was on the floor it had . i walked around the apartment. In the girl's room had things all over the floor . the went to the parents room searched around the room, everything gone there was nothing there , the furniture was there but everything else was there. I went back to the room where the body was at, i did notice that there was a knife in the room , The knife had blood on it which is believe that is was the knife that was use to stab Jenny. i went back to jenny's room i remember seeing some pictures on the floor. i picked them up there were pictures of her and Paul, but some of the pictures had Paul scratched or cut off. as soon as i saw this i wondered if they have had an argument of something. that's when i decided to have a talk to him. And i went on and ask people around the neighborhood and people who knew jenny's family very well about her parents, and if they noticed an awkward change in the family.









Wednesday 12 p.m



i went to the school where jenny and Paul both attended to. i was in the office i talked to the principle and told him what had happened, he told me he understood but that Paul hadn't gone to school.i got Paul's information from the principle. i went to Paul's house luckily he was home. He lived by himself. he looked terrified, but he also looked lost.I didn't tell him who i really was, i told him that i was a counselor and that i had heard about what had happened to his girlfriend. he was still quite. but little by little he started talking, he told me how he didn't think this was ever going to happen, he was telling me the story as if he was saying that jenny wanted to suicide her herself. i have to admit the way the scene looked it did make it look like it was suicide. but i asked him if she had ever talked about deaths, about killing herself or other stuff that could have lead to her death. i asked him if he had talked to jenny lately. he looked pale and now he really looked scared. I DIDN'T KILL HER!!!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU THINK I KILLED HER!!! I LOVED HER!!!!!! I WOULD NEVER HAVE KILLED HER!!!! so then i knew something had gone wrong.










Wednesday 4 p.m.






i talked to Paul but all i got out of him is that the last time he talked to her, she sounded scared and hurt. but that she wouldn't tell him anything. i asked when and at what time was that call. he had told me that she had called him at 4 a.m. in the morning at told him that she loved him and hung up, he tried to call her back but the phone was disconnected.in tears he said " i was calling her but it was disconnected, plus it was early in the morning i was tired,so i went back to sleep and then got a phone call saying that she was gone" i took him home and went to Jazmin's apartment. Jazmin was jenny's best friend the lived in the same building. Jazmin now told me " jenny was acting some what weird and that she will stay home all day and she wouldn't usually do that, she would usually go out with me or she will just go out with Paul, but ever since a week ago she stop going out she stayed home, she never came out, she had missed school 2 days that week, and she was ignoring Paul. he tried to talk to her but she would just walk away like she never heard him and when i tried to talk to her she would just look at me and wen i was done she would just walk away."











Wednesday 6 p.m.





i was in a car outside of the building. when i see jenny's parents going into the building i wondered if they knew what had happened to their daughter i went after them the go to the apartment and saw that the house was empty their daughter wasn't there and that there was blood in the living room. i was talking to them, the had some tears in their eyes. the demanded they wanted to know what had happened to their daughter and if she was killed by somebody they wanted to know who it was and that they wanted that person in jail for what they had done to their daughter.the ambulance took the body to do an autopsy on it to find out what exactly had happened to jenny.








Wednesday 8 p.m.





i wasn't really sure of what exactly what had happened to jenny but i did know that she had not committed suicide even though the scene was left in a way that will make someone think that.


the results of the autopsy were in. i had them in my hands i opened the letter and read it, jenny was killed by someone else and not herself. she was stabbed on her right side and was hit on her head with some kind of metal in the head. i had so many suspects in mind. so i had to find out who had done this to jenny. i went to the police department and told them that i needed a couple of them to help me because i need to bring some people in to take a Lie detector test .

they all had questions about jenny's death, i took in jenny's parents, paul, and Jazmin.





i had the result and surprised when i was that paul..... had passed

jazmin....passed

mom.....passed

and dad.... failed


I was surprised that he had killed his own daughter. he knew that i knew he was guilty and asked me if we could have a talk in private. we went into the conference room and started talking i told him that i was listening to him and whatever he had to say he had to tell me now that was when he started crying and confesed everything. he had told me that they had gotten into an arguement because he didnt like paul and he wanted them to break up and that she refused and then they were yelling at eachother and that he couldnt stand that his daughter arguing with him because of a guy and thats when he started to hit her, from then she got mad that he was hitting her and she ran to the kitchen and grabed a knife and pointed it at him she ran with it and dropped it and all of this had happened because when he had her on the floor hitting her he was super mad a saw the knife and stabed her and after he had killed her he was scared and cleared his figerprints and everything that was there that could have been there as evidence. and so on he turned himself in...

Monday, March 16, 2009

Jacqueline J. Chavez's life story

One Saturday morning I was getting ready to go to church for my cousin's wedding. My husband and I were leaving the house when i started having contractions. My husband took me straight to the hospital and stayed there with me but i had told him to go to the church and told them why i wasnt going able to go plus i was better off without him being there. so he left to the church came back around 1 p.m. that same day and came into the room and he looked surprised because the baby wasn't born yet. so he was there for about 2 hours and then he got hungry and told me that he was going to go downstairs to the cafeteria to go eat something. it was 4:37 when the baby was born, the doctor had told me that i was a girl and they had taken her away to get her cleaned up. about 20 minutes later my husband [Felix] got there and asked if the baby was born already i had told him yea not that long ago. he asked what it was , as soon as i told him it was a girl he had a huge smile on his face. The nurse and the doctor came with the baby and asked for the baby's name, my husband and i decided to name her Jacqueline from our favorite actor, Jazmine because that was his favorite name for a girl. later on that day my older sister came to see the baby she was so happy that the baby was born. she had told me that she wanted to leave the church as soon as Felix had said that i was at the hospital having the baby.


A year past by and jacky was getting bigger, we planned a small birthday party since we didnt have money because i wasnt working. i made the cake myself ,my sister Emelia and her husband came to see jacky since they were jacky's godparents. and so we were at the house for a while and then decided to go to the park for an hour or so. we all saw jacky grow day by day. she was getting older and was starting to look more like me.

the years keep going by. jacky turned five this year and i was pregnant, meaning that she was going to have a little one to play with at all timessince the older ones would really pay attention to her. at first she didnt really like the idea of having a little baby sister, when the baby was born she was so happy and she came to the hospital as soon as the baby was born she came running into the room and said can i pick her name, and so i asked what name does she like, she took a little while and said " it has to start with a J just like my name" and so she wondered "jessica" she shouted. "my friend's name is jessica and i like that name can the baby have jessica as a name?" and so i said i kinda like that name, so we went with it and she got it her way. as time past by jacky was the kind of person who care about everything and everyone, at times we thought she was a little too sensative. but we said it was ok she was going to grow out of it as time past.

she was doing very well in school she was a straight A and B student but when she got to 6th grade things started to change, she dropped her grade she stared talking back to me, she was always on the phone, and she would always get in trouble in school, this was one of the hardest years she had given us, she even had to go to summer school. but that didnt do it she would do anything it really looked like she was giving up in school. we were scared that she would just stop going to school one day. and so it started happening. she didnt get promoted which meant she had to repeat a year that day that they told her she had failed was the worst day ever to us her father was really mad at her, she got home that day and told us and her dad went crazy, he yelled at her and even got to the point where he had to hit her for her to straighten up.

the second year of 6th grade she was going pretty good but around december she had gotten in trouble once again. the school called me that same day and told me what had happened and asked me if i knew that she had a boyfriend. i couldnt believe it but i kinda thought it was my fault that she had never told me anything and that she was now keeping things away from us because i would never ask her bout things in life i would just be there in the house and when she tried talking to me i would ignore her at times. it was all coming back to me and now i didnt know what to do her father was at home that day and heard everything that the school had told me he was eating at the time and then just left the house i wondered where had he gone. he came back at night when jacky had just gone into her room he came in and went staraight into the room. i knew he was mad. the bad things was that it was a friday and that the had the next week off as winter break. her father was mad that day and told her to pack her things she really felt bad at this time she didnt know anything she didnt know what was going to happen he told her to get in the car and left he took her to her grandma's house and told her uncle that she was going to stay there for the week. as soon as she heard that she started crying, she wasnt going to be able to talk to her sisters or brother or mom. she was crying all day and would stop that whole week she came back home the next week the day before going back to school. she straighten out some what but was mad because of what her father had done to her so she ditched school a couple of days and got more in trouble but that didnt stop her.

i wanted all this to stop so i ended up taking her to a conselor and to people who where able to help her.that year was over . now when she got in 7th grade we saw those grades going up and her actions werea lot better. the teachers had called us to tell us that she was doing very good in school but that her attitude had to change, if her attitude changed they where going to transfer her to honors class and so she decided not to go to honors because she had met the friend that she really cared about and her name is alexia. they were together at all times, they were more like sisters. we took alexia with us everywhere we went out, and that is how jacky changed her whole attitude. and so i have to thank alexia for that.

this year she's in eight grade doing pretty good in school and now doesnt keep things away from us.and is now working on her school work and is eager to go to high school, and graduate and get a good carrier, according to her its more about making up the years that she mistreated us and to get us what we deserve.

Friday, February 27, 2009

What i wish from president barak obama

What I wish from barak obama is that he plans to end the iraq war. My first reason is because our troops are in danger. My second reason is that Soldiers family members are terrified. My last reason is that they need to be home. If your family member is out there don’t you want them to be home with you?

Our troops are in danger. People in iraq can plan something and start killing our troops. Our troops can be killed by other at anytime. If our troops were back in the united states they will be safe from all of this. So don’t you think that president Barak Obama should bring our troops back?

The soldiers family members are terrified. all families who have family members in the iraq war are so scared that something happens to them. They are so scared that they wont be able to see that person for the rest of their lives otherwise they are scared that they get killed during the iraq war. Who wants one of their family member to be killed…. Do you ?

Soldiers need to be at home. Soldiers have to be safe, people need to be safe.. not put in danger. Leaving our troops in iraq is like leaving a baby alone in the street. If they all come home we will have protection in the homeland, and they will be safer here in the united states. Don’t you think they should be here in their homeland, and with their families?

This is why What I wish from barak obama is that he plans to end the iraq war. My first reason is because our troops are in danger. My second reason is that Soldiers family members are terrified. My last reason is that they need to be home. Don’t you want your family members to be together?


=]

Thursday, February 26, 2009

Life Changing Event

An event that changed my life was when my cousin sergio died. My cousin sergio died in december 4th of year 2003. that was the sadest weekend of my life. my family had a birthday party for my niece and sergio and i got along very well, my parents wanted to leave early but sergio,me , and some of my other cousins were having fun. so we all went up to my parents and asked them if i was going to be able to sleep over. my dad had told me that i was going to sleep over but i wasnt going to go to bk that weekend. i really didnt care because i really wanted to be with my cousins for that weekend. i was so happy at the time because i was going to sleep over.





After the rest of the family were starting to leave i was talking to my cousin and he was telling me that he felt sick. so i went and told my aunt that he said he felt sick. she went into the room and gave him his medicine. after sergio took his medicine he was telling me that the other day after school he felt really sick and that his parents had taked him to the hospital and that the doctors said he didnt have anything because they couldnt diagnose it . then i was starting to get worried because he kept geting aches. but we were both tired so we just layed down on the bed and fell asleep.





The next morning we got ready because my other cousins were going to come over. my aunt was telling us to eat soup before everybody came because there wasnt enough for everybody. sergio had told his mom he didnt want any because he wasnt hungry, my aunt made him eat since he was suppose to eat before taking his medicine. but after a couple of hours he got really sick and started throwing up... he couldnt stop throwing up until he started throwing up blood. but they couldnt take him to the doctor since the doctors office was closed.


after he stoped throwing up, my cousin judy had got there. so its was three of us at the time, we were so bored we were playing monopoly. when we finished playing he told me to call his girlfriend for him becauuse her mom didnt let her talk to him, and so i did. they were taking for a while. when they stoped talking he started feeling sick again. so then he jusy went to bed and fell asleep.


when he woke up he went to the bathroom and started throwing up again, but that time he was just throwing up blood the whole time. we were all scared, and i was about to leave home, when he ran out of the bathroom and ran to his mom and said i cant take this anymore. my dad told his to not give up , and carried him to the livingroom. my uncle had just got there when my dad took sergio to the livingroom. my uncle started to tear up, when sergio heard his voice, he told me to help him get up and take him to my uncle. so when i took him and went into his arms and said the same thing " i cant take this anymore" and fell on the floor, i was still holding on to him. he looked at me and said " donr forget that i love you guys"i started crying like i never did. i was shaking him calling him, but he didnt respond anymore. the ambulance came and said he was dead already. i was still with him hugging him, he started getting cold. they took him away, when they took him away i felt so bad, i was crying so much that my eyes were really red.
i couldnt believe my cousin sergio aspera had died in my arms.



-> R.I.P SERGIO ASPERA<-
08-29-87 to 12-04-03

Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Parents Are The Best Teachers

Parents are the best teachers. parents are the best teachers for many reasons.One reason why parents are the best teachers is because their children will always look up at them.Another reason is that they will learn a lot from them.My last reason is that parents will always be there to teach their children. What do think about my opinions?


Children will always look up to their parents. Children will always seem to want to be like their parents. Children will think of how life is going for their parents and will think of what they want in their life. They will think more about their life when parents are talking to them about it. Do you think children should look up to their parents?


Children will learn a lot from their parents.Parents will help them with everything they can help them with. Children will listen more to their parents rather than their teachers. Children will always be willing to hear advice from their parents. Don’t you think children will learn from their parents?


Parents will always be there to teach their children. parents are going to be there for their children until they fully grow up. Parents will teach their children right from wrong.
Parents will always be there to give their children a lecture if they decide to take a wrong path.
Don’t you think their parents will teach them right?

in conclusion I think that parents are the best teachers My first reason was because their children will always look up at them. My other reason was that children will learn a lot from their parents. My last reason was that parents will always be there to teach their children. So don’t you agree that parents are the best teacher?

Thursday, February 19, 2009

A Skill That everyone needs

A skill that everyone needs in order to be successful is to know how to read. everyone need to know how to read for many reason. one reason why everyone should know how to read is that without knowing how to read you wont be able to read schedules. Another reason is that without knowing how to read you wont be able to read letters. my last reason is that if people don’t know how to read they wont be able to get a job. Do you want to know how to read or not?


My first reason why everyone should know how to read is that without knowing how to read, you wont be able to read schedules. If a job actually takes you in you wont know what to do. For example if you are a janitor, you wont know where to go to clean because they usually give you a schedule because they wont want to tell you where to go all the time. Now if you knew how to read it you will get farther in life than when you didn’t know how to read, you will get better jobs, and you’ll be able to read a lot of things like schedules, daily newspapers, ect., you will have to denpend on someone if you don’t know how to read. Do you want to be dependent or independent?


Another reason is that without knowing how to read you wont be able to read any letters. Your family might not have a phone, or might live out of the country and cant afford the phone call and instead will write to you, and you wouldn’t know what they wrote to you until you ask somebody to read it for you. If they were house bills, you wouldn’t be able to pay them because you wouldn’t know what that letter was or how much you had to pay. Now if it was to be a letter from your Childs school saying that your child was acting up in class and doing things we wasn’t supposed to be doing and the teacher wanted to have a parent-teacher meeting, you wouldn’t know about it because if your child was capable of acting up in class he or she might even lie to you and say that it is a letter saying that they are so happy to have them in their class or will say anything that pops into their mind.In you opinion will you want other people to know whats going on in your life just by reading something on a letter or will you like to read it yourself and keep it to yourself?


My last reason is that if people don’t know how to read they wont be able to get a job. People who don’t know how to read will have a harder time to find a job because companies are looking for someone that will help them and not let their reputation go down. In days now companies are looking for people who know how to read,write,and talk in spanish, and in english too. You will have to know how to read in order to be able to write. Everyone who doesn’t know how to read or write will have a least percentage of getting jobs. Do you want to have a better pecentage of getting jobs?


In conclusion I say that knowing how to read is a skill that everyone needs in order to be successful in life. . Everyone needs to know how to read for many reason. One reason why everyone should know how to read is that without knowing how to read you wont be able to read schedules. Another reason is that without knowing how to read you wont be able to read letters. My last reason is that if people don’t know how to read they wont be able to get a job. Do you want to be the person who knows the skill of reading and is capable to be successful in life?

Think about it!!!

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

The Best Day Ever

The best day ever was on July 7 Th of year 2008. That Saturday I woke up so excited because I was going to go to a field trip with the boys and girls club from school. When I woke up I noticed it was only 6 A.M, so I decided might as well just take a shower rite now. and so I did when I got out of the shower I looked at the time it was 7 A.M already. I called my friend Alexia to see if she was ready to go to the school. she told me she was ready but she was going to eat before she left. so then I called my other friend Jasmin and asked her if she was able to pick me up when she was on her way to school. she said " of course, I have to go past your house anyways".


I ran to my room and make sure I had every thing I needed. I had everything to do my hair, clothes to change into when we got out of the water. by the time I had everything in my bag Jasmin was already knocking at the door. When I heard her knocking I ran to my parents room and told my dad that I was leaving with Jasmin already. i gave my dad and little sister a kiss on the cheek and walked out. A couple second after I walked out of the house they came out and told us to have fun and to be careful.


Jasmin's mom was waiting for us in the corner of my house and walked us to the corner of the school before she left she told us the same thing to have fun and to be careful. When Jasmin and I got to the school some people were there already and other where still on their way. We went to the store by the school and bought chips and candy. When we came out of the store we saw Alexia. she ran towards us and hugged us. we walked back to the school to met our other friends that were waiting for us at the school.


When we all got back at the school everyone was there already but the only person that was missing was diana which was the coordinator.We were all woried that she wasnt going to be able to go. and the ield trip to get canceled.We were suppose to leave the school at 8 A.M but diana wasnt there so we were just waiting.when she did get to the school. we got all happy and ran towards her. she told us she was a little late because she had to do somethings. as soon as she got there we all got inside of the bus and were ready to leave.


Time past by in our way over there because there wasnt too much traffic and we were all happy and we were all excited, we talked and talked until the bus driver put on the ratio on, when he did that a song came out and we all knew it so most people in the bus were singing to the song.by the time we got to six flags we were super excited. we were in the parking lot. we split up into groups. we walked in and starting going into the rides.
the only thing that sucked was that jonathan didnt want to ride in some of the rides. accordind to him he felt DIZZY!


We went on every ride. Then cecelia came up to me and told me that her group didnt go on any of the rides because one of the girls in her group was afraid of hights. i thought that wasnt fair that because one girl was afraid of height all the overs werent able to go on.In my opinion that was very unfair, that girl shouldnt have gone if she was afraid of heights. so cecelia and i ditched the groups and went on the ranging bull. after that ride we had to run because people were getting on the bus and there was storm alerts.... i will never forget that day because that is the best day ever...SO FAR... =]

Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Nature Haiku

Bottlenose Dolphins
I see them every summer
They are beautiful

Tuesday, February 10, 2009

her smile

When I looked at her smile, I knew she was up to something. she gave everyone the same smile like she was trying to hide something, and ignored the girl she didn't like. the first thing i had in mind was that a guy had broken up with her, but yet i knew that couldn't be true.a guy was looking at her. i told her to see me after school by the lunchroom to tell me what was wrong with her. during science class i was wondering what had happened to her, and what was she hiding. time pasted by and i waited for her by the lunchroom. she didn't go to see me. so i wondered what was wrong. i looked for the guy go was looking at her while we talked in the morning and asked him with anxiety "perhaps do you know where jenny can be?". he looked around and told me "this morning i saw her with some girl who handed a gun, i was so worried but i didn't want to say anything!". i looked at him and said " why didn't you tell me earlier, i would've talked to her!" i broke out in tears wondering where she was at. i ran out of the school to go find her. yet i didn't see her so i decided to go to her house to tell her mom everything. when i got to her house i saw her mom crying, i asked her "where is jenny at?". and she answered " she's in.......... jail, they called me to tell me that she had shot someone and that she was arrested. when i asked her in what jail. she stud quiet and then started yelling out " weren't you with her? she left to your house! what did happened with jenny? don't try to cover yourself up!" i broke out in tears and told her "i never saw jenny this morning, she called me to tell me that you were going to drop her off at school!. i saw her at school, but she just walk past by me. i told her to meet and at the lunchroom after school and never got there, and this is why i decided to come here." she apologized and gave me a hug. she called my mom to tell her that i was going to go with her to do somethings. we left to go see her and jenny cried out " I'm sorry mom, i didn't mean to i had to do it because if i didn't they were going to kill you! I'm so sorry mom but i wasn't going to be able to live without you" she finished telling us what had happened and that a girl named Judy had threaten her to do it . after her mom heard everything. she called the cop to listen to the story. when he heard it he told his partner to start the car. he left and just said a couple of words which were " I'll go find her!". a week later they found Judy. she looked like she was 20 years old, brown hair,tall. the cop told us " we have been looking for her for about two years, she was gotten about 15 young girls do shot people out in the street. now that we got her in custody jenny will be able to come out in about 2 or 3 more weeks". jenny's mom went to the school the next day and told the teachers what had happened. And they had made me tell to students what had happened and how the family felt about it, but without the names of course. but apparently they already knew who i was talking about. 3 weeks past by and jenny came back to school. she always had a smile on her face, and told everyone she was happy to be back in school and out of jail. and ever since i have a smile on my face just because i know that i was lucky because i hadn't lost my best friend for the rest of my life. =]

Monday, February 9, 2009

25 Things I Want To Do In My Lifetime

  1. Get a new cell phone.
  2. Go to Wisconsin Dells.
  3. Be with him for the rest of my life.
  4. Go to florida to see my godmother.
  5. Have a big birthday party.
  6. Go skydiving.
  7. Go a chicago fire soccer game.
  8. Go to the beach.
  9. Not have kids at an early age!.
  10. Graduate from Logandale.
  11. Have a graduation party.
  12. Go to Lane tech/Von steuben.
  13. Graduate Highschool.
  14. Learn a third language.
  15. Go to college.
  16. Finish college.
  17. Live in my own house.
  18. Get a good career.
  19. Become a Doctor or Nurse.
  20. Go to mexico to see my cousin.
  21. Live with the person i truely love.
  22. Get married with that special one.
  23. Have four kids.
  24. Be happy for the rest of my life.
  25. Have grandchildren.